Hai hai~
You might already know the following but!
1. Font is sometimes to difficult to read ( like green/blue with a blurry white outline) or maybe its just me i feel like the text might be outta porpotion? (hey im being as constructive here as possible, as they say a true friend will tell the truth no matter how damming)
2. Some phrases go past too fast? i think itll be cool if you push whats been said previously and in a different colour the second person who speaks! (note: if you like me to tell you where as an example, id like any excuse to watch kanokon again <3)
3. Later or however you wish.. lets have .mkv ;D! with different size options? ill be glad to seed the larger screen sizes
- COUGHZ- i mean
4. Theres more but it'll come around
Other then that! keep up the good work! Together we can all make this anime and community become popular ;D!
Hi hi Ren-ren here again
1. The OP seems to change a bit xD? which OP karaoke is correct?
2. When chizuru-san's little brother gets knocked out by the class president she says something? seirengu? MAYBE? ( a bit after 6:00 in Episode 1)
3. I believe there is a joke just before this as well, 1 being about the extreme? (maybe a cute editors note will be awesome
! there seems to be something going on, slightly perverted, which is why Tayura got punched) and the one when Chizuru mis-interprets Kouta 3:27 Episode 1, she MAY of mistaken Harder/Randomly possibly due to either the similar uses due to context OR kanji/katakana (sorry half year of japanese ftl). These things are Japanese Puns yeh? well anyways i believe their hard to pick up/to explain to begin with.
4. Editors note
! when you get better lets make it a pro one. e.g. colours semi-transparent screen comes down(lets add that paw print sumwhere on the editors note, for personalization reasons?)! with an explanation OR cute editors note to improve on humour! the gold fish was WAS VERY effective! (might add a meaning to it?) However you did do a nice attempt about when Chizuru got accused of Bun Boobs.
5. The Bento Effect! I think you may of jumped or is jumping between Bento its self- and Lunch box! Saying lunch box even though it is kinda the same thing... kinda loses its japanese touch. I've seen some debate about this. so why don't we? I personally say Bento box and a quick simple Editors note would do to explain it.
6. Will further delve into more detailed requests about other jokes further in.
Stay tunes <3, hope this helps ;D
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